Senin, 26 Maret 2012
THE SPECIAL HOLIDAY
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Excuse me
Nib..Nib
some in your text,you use present tense,while in narative text..you should past tense ..oche....
*day was also my special day, do not the day is also my special day
*my spcial day had fun with my family, do not my spcial day have fun with my family
*Atmosphere in malang city was cool,do not Atmosphere in malang city is cool
*the place was clean,do not the place is clean
*i was happy to do not i`m happy to
Im so sorry
thaks
coment in my blog,please!!!!!!!!!!!!.....
thx for your coment,..
i will edit my text :)
nice holiday. why do not you invite us? :D
let's see "me and my family" i think the correct is "i and my family"
i justification about nuzulul coment
dont forget
past tense :
S + v2
is = was
okey...
But i like this ^_^
mbak niken: because, in the story telling about spcial day ( i birthday).. thx for coment..:)
koko: yeahh, i forgot to granting tenses..:)
thx for coment.., like this too...
You're welcome
how about your daily activity???
i hope you dont forget to do it
i`m sory, i late the post in blog, but i have sent in my blog..:)
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